I will read through your manuscript and provide a written summary of feedback about the structure and characterisation in your story, including:

• voice, point of view, description,& setting

• characters

• plot/structure

• punctuation, spelling, grammar, & vocabulary, and

• audience/market

plus

• optional Zoom chat (30 minutes) and response to specific queries.

 

The plan is that you will get some good ideas about how to develop your manuscript further, and bring it closer to a polished gem ready for publication.